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17 March, 2010

Naomi Edmondson
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portrait of Biggie Smalls

Hello all, I am still very much a novice but I would love opinions/critiques on this piece. I put a lot of time into it and want to do what I can to improve it. Thank you!

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Ann 18 Mar 2010

Hi Naomi, I think you did a wonderful job on this. I think "his" right eyeball could use a little shading under his lid and put a thin line of shading under the rim of the crown where it goes across his forehead. Good stuff! Ann

Naomi Edmondson 18 Mar 2010

thanks for your feedback!