sorry to miss you in calgary, i am out of town or i would have made it to your lcuanh. i bought the book anyway and just read it today. i think your style is really growing, you feel much more in command in this book. i liked seeing the "after Grandaddy" in the 240-VNC poem. one thing i think few people have commented on is how indebted you seem (to me) to be to musical influence. which is something losers like me completely understand. personally, i started writing by transcribing the lyrics to songs as a child and then changing them around.
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Anonymous Guest 31 Dec 2012
sorry to miss you in calgary, i am out of town or i would have made it to your lcuanh. i bought the book anyway and just read it today. i think your style is really growing, you feel much more in command in this book. i liked seeing the "after Grandaddy" in the 240-VNC poem. one thing i think few people have commented on is how indebted you seem (to me) to be to musical influence. which is something losers like me completely understand. personally, i started writing by transcribing the lyrics to songs as a child and then changing them around.