Obviously not finished. Drawn during Art History today. So I've gotten two people already that say that there's something off but they can't quite pin down what it is. I think it looks fine. I was thinking that maybe her shoulders were to wide, but then they were too small, you know? I think it could be the hair that's making it look funky. My try at fortshortening again! Yay! I still really like this one, so please if you know wtf is wrong with it, please point it out (but be nice! :p ).