Tamara Paylor 16 Jan 2004

as far as the lighting i did goof on that but when i went to rotate it the design of the tubing got messed up because i had accidentally flattened the layers with all the elements to the tubing

Tamara Paylor 16 Jan 2004

actually as i stated before this one design in particular lost the font that i actually used when it went from mac to pc...this is not how it was done

Pamela Davidson 16 Jan 2004

the overall design layout is good, But I have noticed in many of your pieces that you use way to many font types on one page. If the yellow font on the left was the same as on the right, you could read it. I would also put some kind of shadowing under the product tubes so they look grounded, again you need shadows on the products themselves, the one on the right looks flat and pasted, the lighting does not match up, you have it coming from all directions, I looked at the website of this product, check the packaging of this product, light is coming from the top on all tubes.

Tamara Paylor 16 Jan 2004

lol...believe it or not those are the characters they use on the products website...lol

Amy Pye 16 Jan 2004

The yellow text on the purple is a little hard to read, but I really like the girls on the bottom. However, they look a bit like they're confused by the product.