THIS IS AN INTERESTING ABSTRACT. THE TEARS DO NOT COME THROUGH AS TEARS. THE TITLE SHOULD BE: PORTRAIT OF A WORLD CRYING. THERE IS ALSO TOO MUCH BLACK AT THE BOTTOM. YOU COULD IMAGINE A SCENE TO FILL THE SPACE OF SOMETHING THAT HAPPENS TO MAKE THE WORLD CRY.
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andree lerat 07 Aug 2004
THIS IS AN INTERESTING ABSTRACT. THE TEARS DO NOT COME THROUGH AS TEARS. THE TITLE SHOULD BE: PORTRAIT OF A WORLD CRYING. THERE IS ALSO TOO MUCH BLACK AT THE BOTTOM. YOU COULD IMAGINE A SCENE TO FILL THE SPACE OF SOMETHING THAT HAPPENS TO MAKE THE WORLD CRY.