Perry, I like your work very much. Excellent colors in the sea. If I may, I will offer two suggestions:
1. Never divide your canvas in half. Decide whether the focus is the sky OR the sea, and then that portion should be 2/3. 2. There usually should be a point of focus, a central point of interest. A cloud, a wave, a tree, human figures. Again, use the "rule of thirds" as a general guide. Hope to see more; keep up the good work! good luck, Jerome
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Jerome Stumphauzer 26 Jun 2008
Perry, I like your work very much. Excellent colors in the sea. If I may, I will offer two suggestions: 1. Never divide your canvas in half. Decide whether the focus is the sky OR the sea, and then that portion should be 2/3. 2. There usually should be a point of focus, a central point of interest. A cloud, a wave, a tree, human figures. Again, use the "rule of thirds" as a general guide. Hope to see more; keep up the good work! good luck, JeromeMarika Antal 09 Jun 2008
good painting!!