Jenny Gulseren 10 Jan 2005

Here's #2....

cramer 10 Jan 2005

hmmm...tuffy..the top one makes more sence...like eyes coming out of the dark...bottom one i think would be better if it didnt have the black rectangle around the eyes...maybe fade into the back ground collage

Spurgeon Marshal 11 Jan 2005

umm i think i'll go with the first one. it looks good to me. But if you want to add the flowers and stuff you could try fading the edges a bit more so it wont have any sharp edges. i agree with cramer on that.

Trish Gename 11 Jan 2005

I like the first one best. I like the dramatic values. I get the feeling that this is a portrait of a muslim woman, so the flowers don't make much sense to me, and distracts from the eyes.

Jenny Gulseren 11 Jan 2005

Thanks very much you guys for your comments.... I'll go for the 1st one and upload it as soon as I'm finished with the poem to go along with it. Yes, It is about a Muslim Woman who's beauty can't be revealed because of their religion. :-) Muchas Gracias

Michele Luccketta 16 Jan 2005

I like the first one much better---it is done sooo well...it moves me..

Jenny Gulseren 17 Jan 2005

Thank you Michelle! :)

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